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Nov. 17, 2012, 1:50 a.m.


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Story: Complete - Chapters: 32/32 - Created: Jun 13, 2012 - Updated: Nov 17, 2012
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The market taverns are always noisy. They are few and far between in a business that isn’t so portable—often, there is only one in the towns where the markets take place, and any other drink has to be had from questionable stalls with no place to sit and relax and repeat the day’s gossip with other workmen and merchants before returning to wives or half-covered carts.

Burt Hummel has always enjoyed the noise. His visits to the market have been less frequent as of late, the travels having become something of a burden with his age. In any event, it was time to start training one of his sons—Finn, perhaps, being the more readily available with his big, open, honest face and easy company. People didn’t buy goods from merchants they didn’t like.

His thoughts swirled uncertainly as he sat at the bar with his ale, his brow wrinkled in a way that was etching permanently.

“—and gods blast the Beast Prince for not caring a whit about his attendants.”

Burt perked up slightly at the oath, muttered from only two seats away.

“I say gods bless!” another piped in from further down the counter. “Over Carmel way, my Lord James hasn’t collected nearly as much as he used to—suppose he’s content with what he gets when he doesn’t have to pay it up to anyone else and gets to act the boss.”

“Yeah, well ours has gotten greedy, then,” the first grumbled. “We pay our taxes and tithes double over from last year’s, and I’m certain he’ll be demanding more come next.”

There were sympathetic groans, and someone called out, “Who’s your liege, then?”

“Lord Smythe, I imagine,” Burt cut in, spinning in his seat and facing the man two seats over. “I’m guessing you’re from Lima way as well.”

“That’s right,” the man said. “Not a day’s travel from Dalton castle and none have seen that bastard prince in nearly seven years. The older Smythe was bad enough, but now that Sebastian’s been made knight-commander of the regiment as well, it’s only a matter of time before he takes over completely.”

“What you mean?”

The man turned to face the rest of the tavern completely, which had become rather invested in the conversation at the bar.

“What I mean,” the man said carefully, bold from ale and ire. “What I mean is that Lord Smythe is cousin to the Prince, and if the Prince continues whatever madness is going on at that castle, Smythe’ll have legitimate claim. He can raise the regiment and storm the castle and become Prince himself, and then we’ll all be for shit.”

Mutters broke out, scandalous glares and whispers of portent.

“—wouldn’t stick around if it were so—“

“—and where he might be, nobody’s seen—“

“—heard he’s cursed—“

“That’s what I heard as well,” someone in the back cried. “Back on that hunting trip everyone talked about. Prince Cooper was killed by the wolves, and they injured his brother, might’ve been bit—“

“So what, you think he’s half-beast? Like in the stories?”

“Why else wouldn’t he show his face?”

“Maybe the little Prince just killed his own brother off and couldn’t get away with it,” another voice snapped. “Got no truck with these fairy tales—“

“Well, I don’t know about any of that,” Burt finally said, raising his voice over the din. Everyone in the tavern instantly turned to him, for while not a particularly large man, Burt’s voice carried and he had an imposing physical presence much large than his actual body. It was in the eyes. “But I’ve a friend who attends at the castle, and while he doesn’t speak of the Prince, he’s certainly loyal to him. I’m guessing a man who murders his own brother or turns into a wolf by the moon wouldn’t command much respect.”

“Yeah, and how’d you know that?” the man in the back called. “Have you seen the Prince yourself? Maybe they’re all just afraid.”

“Maybe,” Burt said with obvious disbelief, “but maybe there’s another reason. Damn me if I know it, but all I know is that our friend here is right.” He slapped the man next to him on the shoulder, downing the rest of his ale and slapping the tankard down onto the bar. “He’s a damn sight better than what Smythe would be, and I’ll hold out hope that he’ll step up before his twenty-first birthday and the Lord of Lima can lay an actual claim.”

Without another word, Burt turned and left the tavern.

 

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I don't think the storyline would work without the buildup plus it wouldn't be as interesting to read. I mean I love the 2 guys together as much as the next girl but if you are writing a story about them where they aren't together you need an actual plot to the story otherwise it doesn't make sense or it's just not good. I'm sure I will continue to enjoy it I hope you enjoy writing it! Thank you!

I can't wait to read it either ;)

I'm thrilled you liked it enough to go through it one night! Thank you for reading and taking the time to review, hon <3

Hi, I read through this whole story last night and I absolutely love it! I can't wait to read the next chapter, your writing is really nice :)

NEVER APOLOGIZE. You made my day, seriously. It was being all mediocre and then I read your review and BOOM it was amazing. <33333

Oh god, I'm so sorry you had to experience that! I'm still smiling just from this chapter! I'm sure I will enjoy all future chapters because you are perfect and brilliant and just yeah I'm glad I can inspire you with my craziness! I do support you and you're amazing talent! Thank you again...and once again sorry for the review and the craziness it holds!

I have to apologise cause some people get scared and run away from my craziness! I'm glad I made your day though I like it when people smile it's the best thing about them! If people can't understand how good this story is then they obviously don't like fine literature or are just jealous cause of your perfection! <3 xxx

Soooo good! And 20 chapters posted already, I'm so excited! Off to read more...

im excited to read this I love Klaine AU's where they meet like the disney movies :D

Sounds like a really promising story!

Ack! Need more!