Oct. 20, 2012, 10:52 a.m.
Blaine's father..: The Start..
K - Words: 399 - Last Updated: Oct 20, 2012 Story: Closed - Chapters: 1/? - Created: Oct 20, 2012 - Updated: Oct 20, 2012 238 0 2 0 0
Kurt got to Blaine's house to give him his homework from school. Kurt felt really bad about it that Blaine jumped in front of Kurt for that slushie!
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Kurt knocked on the door and the father of Blaine opened the door. ''Well hello , young man'' The Old man said. ''Can i help you with somthing?''
''Hello ! I'm kurt hummel ! ''He raises his hand ''I'm here for Blaine Anderson , i'm his... '' The're was a moment of science.. Blaine told his Boyfriend to not tell his father about ''us'' to his dad.. ''I'm his friend ! a really good friend ! '' The man looked at Kurt hand.. ''I'm Blaine's father'' Kurt puts his hand down, Because the man wasn't about to shake it. Kurt gave a smal smile ''Is blaine home? I have his homework with me !''
The Old man looked at him with mean eyes ''He's upstairs'' he said shortly. He let Kurt in ,closed the door and walked to the livingroom. Kurt walked upstairs and couldn't wait to see his boyfriend again!
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Kurt opened the door and sees his boyfriend asleep. He smiles softly at his adorable boyfriend and give him a soft kiss on his forehead. He watched his boyfriend for like one hour.
Blaine opened his eyes when he heard something in the bathroom. ''Who's there!!??'' He said softly and a little screamly. Kurt smiled widely and walked out of the bathroom ‘’ It’s me , sweetheart !’’ He said . Blaine heard the voice of his boyfriend and smiled widely.
Kurt walked in and smiled at his boyfriend. ‘’hey there , beautiful ‘’ He said smiling. ‘’Did you sleep well? ‘Kurt said Blaine looked tiredly and smiled at Kurt. ‘’Hmmm.. Yes I did’’ Blaine said smiling and yawns.
‘’ How long have you been here ?’’ Blaine said tiredly. ‘’An hour ago’’ Kurt says and walks to the edge of the bed and sits down. ‘’C’mon get up , let’s make your homework!’’ Kurt said excitedly ! Blaine looked at Kurt with an adorable sleepy face. ‘’ Are you serious? ‘’ Blaine asked. ‘’Cuddle with me first?’’ He opened his arms to Kurt with a smile.
Kurt smiled widely and falls in Blaine’s arms in bed and cuddles with Blaine, Holding him tight like it’s the best thing that ever excised in his live!
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Comments
I think it's a good start. Of course there is always room for improvement. Can't wait for chapter two! :)
Cute. Not too bad but it's best to keep all the different things they say separated into different paragraphs so it isn't as confusing. =) You're also missing some punctuation in there. But all in all, nice effort and I can't wait to see what Blaine's dad does... I so know he's going to catch them =P