July 16, 2012, 3:13 a.m.
When I Met You: Ramblings Of A Reminiscent Kurt
K - Words: 332 - Last Updated: Jul 16, 2012 Story: Closed - Chapters: 1/? - Created: Jul 16, 2012 - Updated: Jul 16, 2012 287 0 3 0 0
I've always hated English. Not the language - although I do prefer French - but the subject. You know, figurative language? Analytical essays? Shakespeare? Actually the only part of it I didn’t dread was the novel-studies. Sure the analysis and evaluation is never enjoyable, but the simple fact that for a few blissful days the only homework you have is reading? That's heaven for me. Even when the book was something I wouldn’t usually seek out at the library, reading has always been an enjoyable experience for me. I guess that’s why I decided to write a book; and a children's book seemed the perfect way to go as I've always had a startling imagination (I guess you have to when you grow up being ostracised from your peers). From the first day of kindy, the other kids knew I was different. Whilst every single other boy was playing with toy trucks and hitting each other with blocks, I wanted to sit with the girls and brush barbie's hair. Even the girls stopped letting me play with them once we got to about third grade; I guess by that time they had realised that although I behaved like them, spoke like them and played with the same toys, I was still a boy. And boys are icky.
I could deal with the loneliness, even though I had no friends I knew that my mummy and daddy loved me, and I could sit in the corner and read a book with no problem. With no one to distract me and nothing else to do at school or in the afternoons - whilst everyone else was running around at the park or on play dates with their friends - my grades were outstanding for such a young age. Everyone else was practicing nursery rhymes and I had just finished the Harry Potter series for the third time. I was quite content with my routine - not happy, but close - until the bullying started.
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I think you wrote this beautifully. It was very easy to read, but also very entertaining. And even though it was an easy read and nothing too exciting happens, I wasn't bored.Perhaps if you could write a proper summary about your story, you would appear a bit more confident. Confidence attracts.Anyway, I have decided to follow this story (at least until I've read the summary, so I know what kind of story it is), because I like your writing. I've only got one tip, always remember to check if your sentences are easy to read. Don't make them too confusing. Other than that... Wel done!
I read it once, and I was like "meh," and then I read it again to find something to pick apart in the review, and then I read it again and I was like, "holy crow, what was I thinking? This is great!" So, nothing actual to tell you, other than that "Barbie" should be capitalized. And you know, like, whatever:3
Haiii B,i love this story, i know its only the beginning but im sure it will be good!!remember to keep updating!!love you xxx