Oct. 18, 2011, 6:33 p.m.
Hollow Shell: Chapter 3
T - Words: 308 - Last Updated: Oct 18, 2011 Story: Closed - Chapters: 3/? - Created: Oct 18, 2011 - Updated: Oct 18, 2011 398 0 2 0 0
“Adams, step away from the hobbit!”
Azimio and Blaine turned to see Coach Sylvester standing at the other end of the hallway. She looked furious and several kids scurried away to escape the mayhem that they knew was coming.
“The only reason you weren’t out of this school last year was because I never caught you,” Sue growled as she came over to them. “But that was unprovoked violence clearly seen by a faculty member and Figgins already feels guilty enough about what happened to Porcelain. You’ll be lucky to get out of this without a lawsuit.”
She grabbed Azimio’s shoulder and dragged him toward the principal’s office with surprising strength.
“You need to be there, too, Anderson.”
Blaine sighed, but trailed after them resignedly. He had really been hoping to stay under the radar this year. The principal’s office was never a good thing, even when he wasn’t the one in trouble, because it always led to his parents getting a phone call. So much for being able to relax during the weekend.
Comments
I really love the idea. You write the story so well. The only downside is that the chapters feel too short; they only take a minute or two to read, each. You're doing a wonderful job so far, though. Great writing style. I can't wait for more.
Thank you! I've been thinking of reworking it, actually, with the chapters being longer and even adding things to the parts I already have.