Dec. 21, 2012, 11:01 p.m.
Love The One You're With: Chapter 2
T - Words: 18 - Last Updated: Dec 21, 2012 Story: Closed - Chapters: 3/? - Created: Feb 11, 2012 - Updated: Dec 21, 2012 1,783 0 6 0 0
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so so so sweet!!! please update again soon
Thank you so much! I hope to be quicker with the next update, haha. We'll see!
You look equally fabulous, Jeff assures him, but Kurt looks affronted. "More! More fabulous!" This makes me so happy. Okay, so I have to rant on the dynamics of the characters right now. Please forgive me, but it simply must be done because they are perfect. First and foremost, Jeff and Kurt. I love how Kurt is so deliciously Kurt in this... and meanwhile Jeff is so Jeff, you know? But despite all that you actually made their characters work together well. Not that they wouldn't in the first place, but it's kinda been hard and fast decided that Jeff and Kurt are far too emotional to be paired with each other properly. You know what I mean... It's why this is a Niff and a Klaine. And on that note, I just really love how Kurt is a boss at texting and Jeff noticed... Just so you know... But yes. I like how they're flirty and they kinda... they're perfectly gay. Not like "Hello, my name is stereotype, thank you." But like, "Hello, my name is subtext, nice to meet you." You feel me. And I love how Kurt was like... helping Jeff pick clothes. I love how Jeff was still as chivalrous and romantic as ever, and Kurt was as charming, willing, and... for lack of a better word: quaffed as ever... I like how they're both goofy together... My only complaint is that Jeff's canon last name is Sterling, but no big deal, I'm just... a Niffler at it's worst. Next, I love Nick and Blaine. I love how... I love how Nick is so completely and utterly and hopeless denial. I'm not sure if that's like... just a surface thing, or if it's inside too, but... mmmm. He loves Jeff. The end. But like, seriously. Nick and Blaine. I love how they're both in that... oblivious to their own feelings stage. That's perfect. And I love how they're also really goofy. Like, just... A+ for entertaining characters. They're awesome. Great work. They're all so silly, and I lol at half of what they say. And that scene with the video games? That was flawless. Amazing job. I love how Nick handled things with Blaine, that was perfect. I love how they both notice things about each other they themselves don't like thinking about. Like Nick getting hugged by Jeff? I think I'm going to reread this. When I'm done my chem... Sigh...
Oh my god, you're making me blush and tear up! Wow, thank you SO, so much! What a thoughtful and thorough review. I am humbled by your words. I am so glad you like it, and liked it enough to take the time to write this to me. I appreciate it more than you know. <3 (And while we're on it--Sterling is a fanon name and not canon, but I understand your frustration. XD I just wanted a different surname to separate him from the fanon-version of Jeff "Sterling" so he could be my own, with the personality and quirks I wanted for him for this story, because I am selfish like that, LOL!)
Your Humsey have such chemistry (as do Blaine and Nick kinda) I don't think you intended for Niff and Klaine to be actually endgame, did you? Lol, it's fine, it's one of my favorite tropes even if I do love a jealous Blaine.
Thank you! As for who/what is endgame, that's a spoiler so stay tuned. ;)