July 30, 2012, 11:24 a.m.
Lost in it All: Chapter 4
T - Words: 196 - Last Updated: Jul 30, 2012 Story: Closed - Chapters: 8/? - Created: Jul 10, 2012 - Updated: Jul 30, 2012 563 0 2 0 0
“Dad, stop! What the hell are you doing?!?” Maggie yelled from her room. Down the hall, Blaine was startled by the yelling. He quickly jumped out of bed, grabbed a flashlight, and ran down the hall to Maggie’s room.
“And you! You little piece of shit!” Brad yelled, flailing his arms at Blaine, missing every time.
“Dad, what’s wrong?” Blaine asked in a firm voice.
“Your mother is gone, and it’s all your guys’ fault!” Brad yelled even louder.
“He’s drunk Mags. Go call 911 quick before he harms himself or us,” Blaine commanded. Maggie just stood there. “Maggie! Hey, Mags!” Blaine yelled. He ran over to her and shone the light on her. All of a sudden, she collapses.
“Oh my god, Mags!” Blaine yelled, horrified by the sight of blood running down Maggie’s chest. He falls down and holds on to her, hugs her tight to him. “Look at what you’re doing dad! You’ve killed Maggie! Your own daughter!” Blaine yells as tears rush down his face.
Brad takes out a gun from his pocket and hits Blaine over the head with it, instantly knocking him out.
Comments
I think you're an excellent writer, and I Love this fic! Only thing is i wish the chapters were bigger xoxo
Thank you! I will try to make them longer. This is the first time I've actually written something on my own, so i'm just now trying to get the hang of it. Thanks for letting me know what you think, greatly appreciated. :)